This is a good start, Yutong. But I would encourage you to reframe your research question a bit. What is the timeframe of your study? Are you looking at only very recent policy proposals (starting in 2020) or are you looking back at past government action also?

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This is a good start, Yutong. But I would encourage you to reframe your research question a bit. What is the timeframe of your study? Are you looking at only very recent policy proposals (starting in 2020) or are you looking back at past government action also? If you are only looking at very recently passed policies or plans, I am not sure how you conclude already here in the proposal (prior to having done the research) that the policies will make “great changes” and better satisfy citizen’s needs for affordable housing.” Based on what criteria are you making these claims and how will you back this up with what kind of data? My recommendation would be to start simple: What are the different levels of government doing to increase affordable housing in Ontario and Toronto more specifically? What different policy tools or approaches are being promoted by the respective governments? How effective are they or will they be?
I have uploaded the instruction and the research proposal I wrote in the attached assignment.